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[William D Carl]

I thought it'd be fun to post a random line from my writing of Bestial 2 (actual title still unsure) every day to whet your appetite.
   These exact lines may not appear in the final drafts.

Here is today's:

How could something that damn big move that damn fast?

Bill

[William D Carl]

The man flailed, even as his torn carotid artery sprayed crimson trails across the train car. 

Bill

[Lord Anubis]

This is a clever idea.  I may have to steal it once Ex-Patriots gets a little closer to release. 

[William D Carl]

With a jolt, the car separated from the couplings holding it to the rest of the subway train. 

And, Lord Anubis, feel free to steal away!

Bill

[William D Carl]

With an ear-splitting growl of protest, a yellow taxi followed the Volkswagon through the broadening hole in the ceiling.

[Dylan J Morgan]

Cool action sequences . . . if one can judge such a thing by random sentences.

Still, good stuff! 

[William D Carl]

“As the self appointed group cheerleader,” Sandy said.  “I’m here to check up on you.”

[William D Carl]

.  Her eyes boiled and exploded from their sockets, and her skin turned black and peeled, sloughing from the bone in large chunks of well done meat.

[William D Carl]

Nicole and Burns held on to each other, using their legs as leverage, the soles of their shoes melting against the hot metal of the seats.

[William D Carl]

“And live what’s left of your life as the man he saw.”

[William D Carl]

“But who’d want to bring a child into a world like this?” she asked. 

[Dylan J Morgan]

.  Her eyes boiled and exploded from their sockets, and her skin turned black and peeled, sloughing from the bone in large chunks of well done meat.

Nice. The best one yet! 

[William D Carl]

His body wanted to give in to gravity and slide down the pole into the writhing mass of rats and reptiles. 

[William D Carl]

Their stomachs were extended and they moved sluggishly, as though they had engorged themselves recently. 

[William D Carl]

Been away doing research, so here are a couple of new ones...

Bits of brain and blood squirted from the thing’s ears. 

Grabbing the end, she yanked the rope as hard as she could, and it slid out from under the beast’s bare foot, giving it a rope burn equivalent of a hot foot. 

“Just press a fucking button, Nicole.  Press them all.”

Cheers.
Bill