I think the font looks a little odd, not that it is, but I think that if you changed it, it might be better. It's not hard to read, but the little bits of broken text on the sides are bothering. You can hardly see William's name down there as well.
Overall, I like the cover; it's moody and makes for a good atmosphere. Not all covers should have gore on them (On the Last Day did, but it was well done) and a moody cover is good.
Still, Permuted has a lot of talented artists, and I look forward to seeing more of what they do in the future. Seems as though you've got yourself busy with Permuted's next batch of talent, Jacob. Booked all the way through this year, hehehe . . .
Not that you have to answer this, but I'm just curious: Roughly how many novels gets a place like Permuted booked for a whole year?