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[Travis Adkins]

This is the first time I'll be showing this, so hopefully it gets good feedback.

[DreamingNeonBlack]

just read it, nice intro. I liked the way everyone is getting a little too comfortable in EastPointe....so you know something is going to happen.

[Travis Adkins]

just read it, nice intro. I liked the way everyone is getting a little too comfortable in EastPointe....so you know something is going to happen.

Thanks, DreamingNeonBlack!

But, after careful consideration, I have decided to rename the book. Henceforth, let this sequel be dubbed Eighteen Wheeler: Walking with the Dead: Zombies and Rock Stars: My Life Story. Everyone seems to agree that it's for the best.

[DreamingNeonBlack]

hmmmm, new title is a little short don't you think?
I mean it doens't give me a sense of what the story is about.

[Travis Adkins]

hmmmm, new title is a little short don't you think?
I mean it doens't give me a sense of what the story is about.

Darn, you're right...

Okay, henceforth let this novel be dubbed: Eighteen Wheeler: Walking with the Dead: Zombies and Rock Stars: My Life Story: Don't get bite or you'll get infect!.

[Matt-M-McElroy]

Downloaded.

I'll try and get to it after I finish up an editing project and a couple of new reviews...

Regards,

Matt

[DreamingNeonBlack]

hmmmm, new title is a little short don't you think?
I mean it doens't give me a sense of what the story is about.

Darn, you're right...

Okay, henceforth let this novel be dubbed: Eighteen Wheeler: Walking with the Dead: Zombies and Rock Stars: My Life Story: Don't get bite or you'll get infect!.

change the last part to " or you'll become infection "

[Travis Adkins]

hmmmm, new title is a little short don't you think?
I mean it doens't give me a sense of what the story is about.

Darn, you're right...

Okay, henceforth let this novel be dubbed: Eighteen Wheeler: Walking with the Dead: Zombies and Rock Stars: My Life Story: Don't get bite or you'll get infect!.

change the last part to " or you'll become infection "

How's this: Eighteen Wheeler: Walking with the Dead: Zombies and Rock Stars: My Life Story: Don't get bite or you'll get infection! We want your brians!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[DreamingNeonBlack]

niiiiiiiiiiiiiice.
NOW I know what the story is about.

[Travis Adkins]

niiiiiiiiiiiiiice.
NOW I know what the story is about.

Whew! Getting the title just right is more complicated than it sounds! I appreciate your help!

[Permuted Press]

How's this: Eighteen Wheeler: Walking with the Dead: Zombies and Rock Stars: My Life Story: Don't get bite or you'll get infection! We want your brians!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry I'm going to have to throw my weight around a bit as the publisher:

Eighteen Wheeler: Walking with the **DEAD!**: Zombies and Rock, Stars: Your Life Story!!: Don't get bite or you'll become infection! We want your BRIANS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, Roll on??

Now we're getting closer.

[HOO-HAA]

But... shouldn't that be 'Teenager Rock stars' in yon title. Trav? 

I liked the prologue - immediately engaging. Effortlessly warm writing style. Good character development, from the outset.

I'm looking forward to reading more... 

[Permuted Press]

Great stuff!  In the first line "rather wouldn’t do" sounds awkward... maybe just "would rather not do"?

[Travis Adkins]

Great stuff!  In the first line "rather wouldn’t do" sounds awkward... maybe just "would rather not do"?

Hey, you're right. (Even an editor needs an editor.) But I think an even better change would be, "he did not want to do it he say no I don't want to! Get me more woods!"

[Permuted Press]

But I think an even better change would be, "he did not want to do it he say no I don't want to! Get me more woods!"

Brilliant!