Dave, I have a question. We, the editors of The Undead II, have requested several changes to your submissions, “Brownlee’s Flame” and “The Dragon and the Abbot.” What was it like trying to incorporate our suggestions? Also, do you feel that your stories have improved with each draft? Should more presses offer in-depth feedback as we have for The Undead II? What, from your experience, are the advantages/disadvantages?