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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #30 on: December 08, 2009, 08:16:57 AM »
Just found it. I will read it.........what was the end to the talk of a paper book???
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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #31 on: December 08, 2009, 10:42:26 AM »
Quote from: Bruce Frozen Solid in Maine on December 08, 2009, 08:16:57 AM
Just found it. I will read it.........what was the end to the talk of a paper book???

Be sure to let me know what you think. The paper version is forthcoming from Permuted Press and right now is in being held up by my woefully slow editing of the manuscript. I'm plugging away at it, though.
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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #32 on: December 08, 2009, 03:34:56 PM »
I can't wait for the print version. I had read quite a few chapters online, but reading online is a bit tough for me so I stopped.

YAY dead tree formats.






Oh, I can haz preevyou of buk cover?
« Last Edit: December 08, 2009, 03:36:27 PM by DreamingNeonBlack »
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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #33 on: December 08, 2009, 03:47:12 PM »
Quote from: DreamingNeonBlack on December 08, 2009, 03:34:56 PM
Oh, I can haz preevyou of buk cover?

We'll have to use the time machine to jump ahead.... everybody hang on!
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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #34 on: December 08, 2009, 03:52:37 PM »
The Permuted Press TARDIS rocks.
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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #35 on: December 08, 2009, 03:53:53 PM »
Ummm... did you just call me a retard?  That is so not PC.
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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #36 on: December 08, 2009, 04:41:14 PM »
I would never!




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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #37 on: December 09, 2009, 04:53:14 AM »
OK, ok i killed a few dozen trees last night printing out the whole story. wow that took a bit! But looks great.
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"She laughs at my dreams, but I dream about her laughter. "

"There has been too much violence. Too much pain. But I have an honorable compromise. Just walk away. Give me your pump, the oil, the gasoline, and the whole compound, and I'll spare your lives. Just walk away and we'll give you a safe passageway in the wastelands. Just walk away and there will be an end to the horror."

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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #38 on: December 17, 2009, 08:38:01 AM »
Have been really getting into this story. I have to say i like it. Yes sir i like it. I just finnished at the part after Bishop had his first sit down with the town leader. So i have a ways to go, but from what i have read so far, :thumbsup: Great Job!
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"She laughs at my dreams, but I dream about her laughter. "

"There has been too much violence. Too much pain. But I have an honorable compromise. Just walk away. Give me your pump, the oil, the gasoline, and the whole compound, and I'll spare your lives. Just walk away and we'll give you a safe passageway in the wastelands. Just walk away and there will be an end to the horror."

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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #39 on: December 17, 2009, 09:03:22 AM »
Quote from: Permuted Press on December 08, 2009, 03:53:53 PM
Ummm... did you just call me a retard?  That is so not PC.

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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #40 on: December 17, 2009, 11:13:04 AM »
Quote from: DreamingNeonBlack on December 08, 2009, 04:41:14 PM
But if the short bus fits...

It's not THAT bad a place. Everyone puts me on there and it makes me happy to feel special... hurrr....  :clown:
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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #41 on: December 21, 2009, 10:01:02 AM »
Great story! i loved it. Very interesting and very new. A fresh and evil look at the religious world..........I did have a prob though......the end. The last 2 pages in truth. I didn't understand? It just ends? What happoned with Eliot and Evajean? who is the Boy? I'm really lost!! HELP!! I NEED INFO!!!! Please i'm begging!! :headdesk:
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"She laughs at my dreams, but I dream about her laughter. "

"There has been too much violence. Too much pain. But I have an honorable compromise. Just walk away. Give me your pump, the oil, the gasoline, and the whole compound, and I'll spare your lives. Just walk away and we'll give you a safe passageway in the wastelands. Just walk away and there will be an end to the horror."

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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #42 on: December 21, 2009, 07:40:51 PM »
Wow count the min. between now and the last post. Thats how tired i am. i get it. say no more...............2 bad it had 2 hit me @ Toys R" Us
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"She laughs at my dreams, but I dream about her laughter. "

"There has been too much violence. Too much pain. But I have an honorable compromise. Just walk away. Give me your pump, the oil, the gasoline, and the whole compound, and I'll spare your lives. Just walk away and we'll give you a safe passageway in the wastelands. Just walk away and there will be an end to the horror."

If you find yourself in a fair fight, your tactics suck.

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Re: So who's reading THE HOLE?
« Reply #43 on: December 22, 2009, 07:29:40 AM »
Thank you for reading it. And it's awesome that you enjoyed the book.

As to the ending, that's something I'm gonna work on during editing. I like it, but several people have voiced confusion, so I'm planning to extend it a bit and try to make things somewhat clearer. I'd rather not post spoilers here, so maybe emailing me directly is better, but I'd love to hear what you got from it. I'd love to hear your interpretation of the ended because, if it's not the same as mine, then that'd mean I really do have to work on it a lot in editing.

Thanks again.
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