Actually, DL, thanks. I remember praising you for your story either on the board or in chat. Remember that?
It's been, what, five months since I read your story? It slipped past me when I flipped through the book, skimming for the ones I really dug (no pun).
Review being amended.
(And no, folks, I'm not adjusting my review solely because of what D.L. said above. I honestly did like his story and remember even asking him if a novel-length version was in the works utilizing the ideas put forth in "Pale Moonlight.")
The ones that fell short didn't "suck." They just didn't grab me like the ones I cited in the review.